Speaking with my teacher

After speaking to my teacher to my teacher last class about my main points to follow my incentives for this project is becoming more clear. I have been mostly collecting photographs for my cooking such as step by step cooking so i can further on my magazine skills. After i have been advised to speak more humanly or to connect when writing my blogs rather than writing it like an essay. I have a trial and error collected this weekend that i will provide pictures of and write some captions for the photographs. As i print out my pages at the library today to glue on my magazine  should finsh writing the captions by tomorrow and follow up with bloggers to